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Starting off, for a first, this is quite amazing. Let's pick it apart now. Goods: The muzzle was drawn greatly, and the head too. I lik...

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::Commission:: Bounce Blue Charm by AngelLightYTI reached 100 watchers xD::Commission:: Bounce Blue Charm by AngelLightYT



To celebrate the event i decided to hold a contest. And since i can't do art the rewards will be points (or paypal usd eqivalent)

Prizes:


1st 2000 Points (or 25 usd)

2nd 400Points  (or 5 usd)

3rd 100Points 


How to enter:


-You have to comment on this journal saying that you want to enter
-You have to share this in a journal and link it in your comment
-You have to tag at least 1 artist that you think might be interested in entering 
-You have to tag me in the description of the art you'll make for the contest


What to draw:


Nightmare Moon Nightmare Moon grin 


Yep, anything goes, if you wanted to draw her this could be the right occasion xD 
If you really don't want to draw the character for some reason, Chrysalis is fine too.


Additional informations:


-I will be the one choosing the winners
-You don't have to be a watcher to enter, just follow the 'How to enter'
-The contest will stay open for 3 months (so it will close in date 15/06/2017, 1 or 2 days of delay might be possible)
-The listed prizes are guaranteed, i will only increase them if this has many entries or exceptionally good ones
-You can send any number of artworks, but i would advise focusing on one
-I'm not a big fan of anthro or human drawings, but i'll still consider those
-For any questions feel free to note me



Thanks to every one of my watchers and to everyone who has read this far, i really appreciate the support.
If you don't want to enter but you still want to help just share this around and comment with the link xD 

::Commission:: Bounce Blue Charm by AngelLightYTI reached 100 watchers xD::Commission:: Bounce Blue Charm by AngelLightYT



To celebrate the event i decided to hold a contest. And since i can't do art the rewards will be points (or paypal usd eqivalent)

Prizes:


1st 2000 Points (or 25 usd)

2nd 400Points  (or 5 usd)

3rd 100Points 


How to enter:


-You have to comment on this journal saying that you want to enter
-You have to share this in a journal and link it in your comment
-You have to tag at least 1 artist that you think might be interested in entering 
-You have to tag me in the description of the art you'll make for the contest


What to draw:


Nightmare Moon Nightmare Moon grin 


Yep, anything goes, if you wanted to draw her this could be the right occasion xD 
If you really don't want to draw the character for some reason, Chrysalis is fine too.


Additional informations:


-I will be the one choosing the winners
-You don't have to be a watcher to enter, just follow the 'How to enter'
-The contest will stay open for 3 months (so it will close in date 15/06/2017, 1 or 2 days of delay might be possible)
-The listed prizes are guaranteed, i will only increase them if this has many entries or exceptionally good ones
-You can send any number of artworks, but i would advise focusing on one
-I'm not a big fan of anthro or human drawings, but i'll still consider those
-For any questions feel free to note me



Thanks to every one of my watchers and to everyone who has read this far, i really appreciate the support.
If you don't want to enter but you still want to help just share this around and comment with the link xD 
RULE 1. You can only say Guilty or Innocent.

 RULE 2. You are not allowed to explain anything unless someone messages you and asks! Now, here's what you're supposed to do... 
And please do not spoil the fun.

Copy and paste this into your journal, delete my answers, type in your answers and tag 5-10 of your friends to answer this. Then see what happens.

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1. Asked someone to marry you? 
Guilty

2. Kissed one of your friends? 
Innocent

3. Danced on a table in a bar?
Innocent

4. Ever told a lie?
Guilty

5. Had feelings for someone whom you can't have?
Guilty

6. Ever kissed someone of the same sex?
Innocent

7. Kissed a picture?
Guilty

8. Slept in until 5 PM? 
Innocent

9. Fallen asleep at work/school?
Guilty

10. Held a snake?
Innocent

11. Been suspended from school?
Guilty

12. Worked at a fast food chain/restaurant?
Guilty

13. Stolen something? 
Guilty

14. Been fired from a job? 
Innocent

15. Done something you regret?
Guilty

16. Laughed until something you were drinking came out of your nose?
Guilty

17. Caught a snowflake on your tongue?
Guilty

18. Kissed in the rain? 
Innocent

19. Sat on a roof top?
Guilty

20. Kissed someone you shouldn't? 
Innocent

21. Sang in the shower?
Guilty

22. Been pushed into a pool with all your clothes on? 
Guilty

23. Shaved your head? 
Innocent

24. Slept naked?
Guilty

25. Had a boxing membership? 
Innocent

26. Made a boyfriend/girlfriend cry? 
Guilty

27. Been in a band? 
Guilty

28. Shot a gun? 
Guilty

29. Donated Blood? 
Innocent

30. Eaten alligator meat? 
Innocent

31. Eaten cheesecake? 
Innocent

32. Still love someone you shouldn't? 
Guilty

33. have/had a tattoo? 
Innocent 

34. Liked someone, but will never tell who? 
Guilty

35. Been too honest? 
Guilty

36. Ruined a surprise? 
Guilty

37. Ate in a restaurant and got really bloated that you can't walk afterwards? 
Guilty

38. Erased someone in your friends list? 
Guilty

39. Dressed in woman's clothes (if you're a guy) or man's clothes (if you're a girl)? 
Guilty

40. Joined a pageant.
Innocent

41. Been told that you're handsome or beautiful by someone who totally meant what they said?
Innocent

42. Still have communication with your ex? 
Innocent

43. Cheated on someone? 
Innocent

44. Get totally drunk one night and you have an important exam tomorrow morning? 
Innocent

45. A total stranger treated you by paying your fare? 
Guilty

46. Get so angry that you cried? 
Guilty

47. Tried to stay away from someone for their own good?
Guilty

48. Thought about suicide?
Guilty

49. Thought about murder?
Guilty

50. How about Mass Murder?
Guilty

51. Rode in a stranger's vehicle?
Innocent

52. Stalked someone? 
Guilty

53. Had a girlfriend/boyfriend?
Guilty

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[ADOPTS] AvantadorXTrue Benoitoite [3/4 OPEN]
The Layout is a bit clunky, was tight on time, so any future breeding, I swear will look better, Layout wise.

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Starting off, for a first, this is quite amazing. Let's pick it apart now.

Goods: The muzzle was drawn greatly, and the head too. I liked the markings in the back as well, but I feel they had no texture to them.

Bads: Nothing overly bad, a few noticeable thing though. I feel like the limbs are a bit too wide and very, very slightly too long. Again, the back marking accent it well, but it lacks texture. The way the tail connects to the rump is ackward. Also, again, no texture on the tail. It's like if you dipped half a wolf's tail in white paint. It would make an impossibly smooth line. Fur could be viewed as smooth and connected, but here's no impurities. The paws look weird too. Not the shape, the colors don't click for me personally. If you were trying to make face markings, same with the consistency and the texture. If you were trying to make whiskers, (no offense) then you horribly failed. Whiskers can be used to convey emotion and such, but they are not impossibly thick like that.

Overall, this is very well drawn, and has lots of potential as well.

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:icongreihound:
Greihound Featured By Owner 5 days ago  New Deviant
cheers for the watch 

i think this time i can offer a doggo (❍ᴥ❍ʋ)
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DawnAuroua Featured By Owner 5 days ago  New Deviant Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oooh

thanku!
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SleepyDemonMonster Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Professional Digital Artist
thanks for the fav. <3
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DawnAuroua Featured By Owner 5 days ago  New Deviant Hobbyist Digital Artist
np!
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Greihound Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2017  New Deviant
thanks for the fave

erm... here have some glitter (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧
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DawnAuroua Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2017  New Deviant Hobbyist Digital Artist
O^O TANKUSOMUCHSENPAI 
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Greihound Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017  New Deviant
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3wyl Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
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Thank you!
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